If I were your teacher, I'd give you an F since you thought these "animated" loops, each with only three frames of animation, make for a passable presentation. To be more in depth, tilting pages so the frames will sync in the proper positions without trying to hide it harms the presentation even further. No, it does not lend to the "honesty" of the artist, it lends to the idea that you're an amateur. Even better is that despite you tilting the pages together so they'd match, the characters still dance about the screen as they sit still, most notable of which being the cyclops.
Another sign of excellence is the constantly changing aspect ratio between the chicken scratch loops and dialog cards.
Speaking of the dialog cards, if not for them, I'd have no idea what was going on. You are completely lacking in the ability to convey anything using sequential art. If I were you, I'd fire your art teacher for his negligence.