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Just a few things

For one, her head isn't angled to be facing the flowering, why does she have her head tilted up like that? She appears to be looking off in the distance.

Also her left arm is pretty much just as long as her right arm, when the left one is supposed to be shorter because of the perspective she's facing.

Her wings are on at a completely different perspective than the perspective she's facing.

Not to be nit picky about the content but, why is she anorexic above her torso when she's not in her legs?

It's okay, I don't judge artwork based on how good the coloring looks but rather the artwork itself.

Occluded responds:

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Not everything's that great.

The one thing I can't get over are the 3D elements in your backgrounds. They look unfinished and just cheaty.

But as for the main illustration, the perspective is again, a bit off. Her left breast [from the viewers perspective, right] is on a higher elevation than her right breast, which from this perspective it shouldn't. But then again, she is being lifted up at an approximately high speed up through a transparent tunnel in space so that I guess that could have been intentional.

Other than that, it looks pretty good.

Her back appears slightly big for the rest of her build though.

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Spot on

There are a few things I could nit pick about but they're not that important. I like how you stylized her hair.

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Everything looks correct.

For a piece that's unfinished, it looks damn good to me.

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Looks okay

I like your take on the Lauch Ness Monster, or however his name is spelled. As for the guy, his head looks like it's set too far back, like his neck doesn't bend back when his head does; I can see his neck curving into his face.

His arms and his head are at a different perspective than the rest of his body; they're set back further and angled toward the viewer than the rest of his body is. And his right forearm is angled toward the viewer more than everything else; his knife appears out place in his hand because it's fitting the same perspective as his arms and head are.

His leg also just juts out of his body in a weird way, it sorta looks like it's a fake limb. It would have been better if you hadn't drawn his leg there at all.

He also appears to be looking at the floor and not at the monster. If you distanced them apart more it would work in that aspect.

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Longer explanation here:
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Ummm...

About the guy in the background; why are his legs facing a different perspective than his upper body? I can understand that drawing things that are small and intended to be viewed from a distance can be difficult, but it's not like there's not a solution to it.

Try drawing the smaller elements on a different piece of paper on the equivalent scale that you're using now, artiscope them and shrink them down to fit your scale.

The face is just, well a face with some good coloring.

The background looks lovely, but I can't help but feel that it was done in 3D software. It looks too perfect to have been done in Flash, Fireworks, Photoshop or even Illustrator.

Occluded responds:

WARNING TO EVERYONE:
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Longer explanation here:
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Some issues

For one thing the perspective is kind of screwed. His right arm, [from the viewers perspective, his left arm] is longer than his left arm [from the viewers perspective, his right arm] when from the perspective trajectory, it should appear shorter because it's further away from the viewer than his right arm is.

I could understand that if he was slouching to his right, but his position doesn't indicate that at all. The illustration would be perfect if it weren't for that.

Above all the glamour of the coloring, it's nothing to be excited about. Especially when the backgrounds are comprised of elements from 3D software.

Occluded responds:

WARNING TO EVERYONE:
DON'T EVER REVIEW THIS KID.

Unless you want every single piece you've done reviewed as some sort of crazy revenge. He doesn't really know what he's talking about, and he'll put up the pretense of being constructive so he can feel good about himself. But read his reviews and ask yourself. Does it seem like he's trying to help? Or like he's trying to look like he's trying to help.

Longer explanation here:
http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/1211940/1
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Really....

Why are his horns feeding out of his eyes? Why doesn't his jaw connect to the rest of his head? Why are his nostrils circular? Why didn't you clear out that white space at the bottom after scanning it in? Why is this so half assed? Why do you think that anyone is going to buy that "5 in the morning" excuse?

If you don't care to be an artist, then why publish artwork?

Even though I know you don't care, I just gotta say, you are one of the shittiest artists I've ever seen before.

Oh and your not a musician pal, you're a pretentious faggot who uses Mixcraft track samples to carve out your songs.

The only difference between you and me in that aspect; I never claimed to be a talented musician or to attribute talents I don't have. I see I'm not the only one you've pissed off before.

Granted, although HiryuGouki is a sub par artist... wait... something just crossed my mind; you're both '09 users...

Oh wow I just realized what a waste of time this all was.

Oh, and nobody cares about your birthday.

Jigsaw80puppet responds:

I bet you feel really proud of yourself <333

Fucking awful

There is such a thing as an inker, they're not expensive, Sharpie sells them, use them. I can barely read the dialogue because most of it appears faded out.

Can you at least crop the bottom out so it doesn't show that you obviously edited this in MS Paint? Speaking of which, couldn't you have artiscoped this piece of shit in MS Paint, if you really gave a shit I think you would at least attempt at making this aesthetically presentable, and hey, people will praise you for using MS Paint because of how "difficult" it is.

Are you going to develop from this criticism or are you going to regurgitate it again by leaving an ever so concise 'review' on another piece of artwork of mine?

Jigsaw80puppet responds:

I learned something today !

My goodness

That looks like the cat equivalency to the those old Ferby toys back in the 90's.

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