Wow very nice
I really like your style. I really have no words to describe what I particularly like about it. If you have Flash, which I think you do considering some of your latter pictures, you could add coloring by rotoscoping the picture with line tool and give it color.
Interesting art style
The captain's arms are a bit long but they're okay. It looks pretty good. Although it could stand improvement, it's not all that bad.
I spot something wrong
His right arm is longer than his left arm when it's supposed to be further away from his left arm at this angle. Furthermore, his elbows start at his waste when they should be up at his chest [where his ribcage ends, from the front of his chest I mean].
I don't know if that was intended anatomically or not, because both of his forearms joint to his elbows at his waste, but I know that the perspective is off quite a lot.
The coloring is nice though, is the light source coming from his fire? If so, could you give him a shade of orange on top of his fluff to indicate so?
Uh no
You don't get what Sukomi meant when he said "Great but you forgot to fill a frame", he meant that the character loses his entire color scheme near the end and his hair/shirt become pure white.
squint harder. It was a flash effect, as in a camera flash. That's why words appear on the same frame. I said I regretted not adding a few frames to the flash because everyone seems to have so much damn trouble recognizing it.
Crap
Why are his arms long enough for his hands to be hitting his knees? Why is his elbow at his waste? Why is there no curve on the inside of his shoes? Why do his feet appear to be standing on two different platforms? Why does his right hand have five fingers but no thu-- ah I see, you just drew the joints incorrectly, so it appears as though what's supposed to be his thumb is actually a fifth finger.
It's transparently clear that your grasp on anatomy just doesn't exist.
Lacking anatomy and shit perspective
Why is it that the leg that's supposed to be further away from the viewer is jolting out further than the leg that's supposed to be closer to the viewer? Furthermore, why is the one that's supposed to be closer to me smaller than the one that's supposed to be further away? Are her legs supposed to be disproportionate? If you were to rotate her to face the viewer, would her right leg be bigger than her left? Would she slouch to one side? Considering how her right arm is bigger than her left I'd say that she would most certainly be lopsided.
This wouldn't be a problem if both her legs weren't pointed at the same direction, as if you just copy/pasted them, but I know you didn't because her right shin jolts out further away than her left leg does, only except you actually decided to use perspective here, which it's too late for now, it's still bigger and longer than the leg that's supposed to be closer to me.
That V shaped emblem on her head is facing me when it's clearly supposed to be facing the same direction as her face; both ends of the emblem are the same height, width and they curl away from each other. It's just another example how how shitty your lack of perspective is.
She doesn't have a chest of any kind, no rib cage, no collar bone, it's just her stomach connecting to her shoulders. What? You were too lazy to actually develop a clear distinction between the two? Were you jacking off while drawing it? It appears as though you were, otherwise this piece of shit wouldn't look so awful.
Also, her right leg changes perspective between the space that's overlapped by her left leg, which tells me that you didn't draw her right leg all the way through, you just made her right foot an additional detail after you done with everything else beneath her torso. Terrible. Even so, that's not quite as bad as her left leg, where her shin faces a different perspective than her thigh, as though it's broken into that position. It's so bad it's unbelievable.
There's no shading at all. You could at least try and make this aesthetically presentable by adding substance to the coloring.
The detail equally sucks ass, why are her thorns tucked into her fingers when they're clearly supposed to be attached to her hands? Why don't her arms have joints?
FWI, intentionally promiscuous anthropomorphic pokemon = furry erotica. Congratulations you dolt, you're a furry.
Learn anatomy, figure out your perspective and just learn how to draw.
Looks good
No anatomical issues here.
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Just a few things
For one, her head isn't angled to be facing the flowering, why does she have her head tilted up like that? She appears to be looking off in the distance.
Also her left arm is pretty much just as long as her right arm, when the left one is supposed to be shorter because of the perspective she's facing.
Her wings are on at a completely different perspective than the perspective she's facing.
Not to be nit picky about the content but, why is she anorexic above her torso when she's not in her legs?
It's okay, I don't judge artwork based on how good the coloring looks but rather the artwork itself.
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