Psychopath's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sonic chillin at Mushroom Hill]

Wow, it's literally the same shit as before on your FarahProductions account only you reshaped the stage content so that the content to the left field disappeared. The resolution is still shitty and almost nothing in the artwork has changed so here we go.

I like how Sonic is clearly meant to be laying against the mushroom's stem but he's positioned in such a way that implies he's laying on the ground. Shouldn't the mushroom be casting a shadow over him to some degree since he's clearly using it for shade?

I love how shitty the main mushroom is too, it has the least competent amount of work put into it, it looks more like a flap on a pole than an actual mushroom and the polka dot pattern is nonsensical, non of the red circles on it are curved to match the shape of the mushroom head and the ones at the top even protrude off the top, like they're stickers peeling back or some shit.

This is probably you're least impressive yet simultaneously most competent piece to date. The composition is still nonsensical, of course, you're still using traced artwork, you're still using duplicated art assets that you had to resize to fit the frame but it doesn't make me want to vomit out my brain like the other uploads do.

The trees in the background, however, are just as incompetent as ever; they're pillars with a pattern of leaves pasted on top.

[A madness day 2014 activity]

Quit your job, you should be doing this for a living. You're obviously talented enough.

[C]

I've seen better anatomy from HiryuGouki. Her legs are stumps. I shouldn't even have to explain why this is so horrible. Her legs are a fourth of the length that they should be.

SenpaiLove responds:

I'm still new to this kind of angle when it comes to a character perspective so I'm not pro at it yet. I'm still currently learning anatomy so it's ganna be a while until i get things perfect.

[TSoH]

Funnily enough, this artwork has better anatomy than anything Frank "StringAnime" Stringini had ever shat out. This is ironic considering the fact that he's in love with Adrellia Village.

In any case, the only real complaint is that it's underdetailed and the tree limbs only vaguely represent what they are and barely give an impression on what they are.

[Sweet Caroline]

Proportions are all fucked up.

I know that people are pretty impressed simply because of the stylization of the artwork, the gradient shading and all that. But I certainly am not.

Her right arm is long enough for her hand to reach her knees. I don't mean in the position she's in, I mean even if she stood up her hand could reach her knees without having to bend her body to do so while her left arm, the arm that should seem bigger by comparison because it's closer to the viewer, is perfectly proportionate with her body.

Her hips are weird, they gouge out as if you drew her upper body separate from her lower body and then pasted them together; they bend at two different angles. If you remove her upper body from her lower body, the uncompleted artwork of her lower body would imply that the rest of the character is supposed to be leaning forward, not back. Apparently her ilium/pubis can mirror the position of the rib cage.

[Wasp Kirby]

Cool

So this is what it would look like if Kirby absorbed a hornets nest eh?

[blue hair]

I like it.

I like the multiple patterns that you used at the top left and right. It vaguely reminds me of Gerald Scarfe. Also sorta reminds me of Cthulu.

Although I do have some suggestions, what would have looked better is if on that multicolored eye thing, those black lines that spawn from it were curved to form the outline, as opposed to the outline just simply being, well, there.

Also those brick walls aren't, straight. It looks like you just drew them on paper, which is nice and all, but we have software that allows us to make straight lines and form perfect cubes at a correct perspective.

The cloud cover in the background is too blurry and underdetailed for me. But that's just me.

Is that your background at the bottom right?