Psychopath's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Heavy Metal]

Not everything's that great.

The one thing I can't get over are the 3D elements in your backgrounds. They look unfinished and just cheaty.

But as for the main illustration, the perspective is again, a bit off. Her left breast [from the viewers perspective, right] is on a higher elevation than her right breast, which from this perspective it shouldn't. But then again, she is being lifted up at an approximately high speed up through a transparent tunnel in space so that I guess that could have been intentional.

Other than that, it looks pretty good.

Her back appears slightly big for the rest of her build though.

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[A-Bot redesign]

Spot on

There are a few things I could nit pick about but they're not that important. I like how you stylized her hair.

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[Mega Man]

Everything looks correct.

For a piece that's unfinished, it looks damn good to me.

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[Violent Encounter]

Looks okay

I like your take on the Lauch Ness Monster, or however his name is spelled. As for the guy, his head looks like it's set too far back, like his neck doesn't bend back when his head does; I can see his neck curving into his face.

His arms and his head are at a different perspective than the rest of his body; they're set back further and angled toward the viewer than the rest of his body is. And his right forearm is angled toward the viewer more than everything else; his knife appears out place in his hand because it's fitting the same perspective as his arms and head are.

His leg also just juts out of his body in a weird way, it sorta looks like it's a fake limb. It would have been better if you hadn't drawn his leg there at all.

He also appears to be looking at the floor and not at the monster. If you distanced them apart more it would work in that aspect.

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[5' 11" Under]

Ummm...

About the guy in the background; why are his legs facing a different perspective than his upper body? I can understand that drawing things that are small and intended to be viewed from a distance can be difficult, but it's not like there's not a solution to it.

Try drawing the smaller elements on a different piece of paper on the equivalent scale that you're using now, artiscope them and shrink them down to fit your scale.

The face is just, well a face with some good coloring.

The background looks lovely, but I can't help but feel that it was done in 3D software. It looks too perfect to have been done in Flash, Fireworks, Photoshop or even Illustrator.

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[Tankman]

Some issues

For one thing the perspective is kind of screwed. His right arm, [from the viewers perspective, his left arm] is longer than his left arm [from the viewers perspective, his right arm] when from the perspective trajectory, it should appear shorter because it's further away from the viewer than his right arm is.

I could understand that if he was slouching to his right, but his position doesn't indicate that at all. The illustration would be perfect if it weren't for that.

Above all the glamour of the coloring, it's nothing to be excited about. Especially when the backgrounds are comprised of elements from 3D software.

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Longer explanation here:
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[Power Armor Colored]

Static and boring.

This one isn't as anatomically flawed as your 'tactical tankmen' picture, but still incompetent.

One example is that his feet are not level with each other. Another is that his knees are not level with each other. All and all, his right shin is shorter than his right, while his right thigh tries to compensate for the shortness of it by extending itself. His feet are also tilted at different angles.

Oh and you fail in this being at all dynamic. It's totally static. He's just standing there posing with his chest leaning forward.

For someone who acts like a professional, you really have no idea what the hell your talking about.

Kinsei responds:

the portions are off, I do admit, but this is still better than you could do. On the subject of being static, yeah he is standing there, woo great job at analysis. At least he succeeded at standing there and being static rather than trying to look animated and failing.