Hhhmmm.
your plot is flawless but your animation skills could use a lot of work. Sound is perfect except that you need to spend some time on the animation rather then just doing it all in one day. (Because it sure does look like you did it in one day.) But your voice acting skills are brilliant and awesome. I look forward to a remake if you'r making one. I hope you do because this is the kinda stuff you can sell. You just need to consatrait on animtion a bit longer then just an hour. I can tell that you tweened most of it. Dont do that with charicters. And actualy make the wheeles turn on a car instead of them standing still and stuff.